Friday, October 16, 2015

Description Sense

I'm blogging this because I liked doing this and it was challenging.
We were learning to write a description from a sense.


Success Criteria
Has strong adjectives
Different sentence beginnings
Different sentence lengths
A simile and/or alliteration
Has an intro body and conclusion
Thoughtful word choices
Your own goal Write simple, compound and complex sentences correctly


When I turn around I see the most majestic scene. The clouds are as fluffy as sheep and there is green growing grass everywhere. Crystal flowing water at the bottom of the hill is going behind the tall trees. The sea blue sky is as blue as the ocean. The trees are scattered everywhere like soldiers at an army. The hills are going as far as I can see and begin to blend in with the crystal clear sky. It is an amazing and delicate scene.