Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Emotive Writing

Emotive Writing
Dylan Costello
this is my Emotive Writing so I hope its good


I closed my eyes as the big beasts are booming down and crashing, music is coming, it is slowly changing. The music comes alive as it gets longer and louder, it's like a war going on and I’m in it. The chills of the music is climbing down my back and the horror of it creeps over me. The music is getting lower and it stopped.


It reminded of my Aunt's funeral and how she died of cancer. How the music was so sad and so was this. Dad went up and said goodby, some of the people are crying, so was I. The music reminded me of the music in the funeral because it was sad. Life will not be the same, goodbye.

Thursday, May 21, 2015

Kaitawa-A Brief moment

I sat down and we go and go but some how he got as. He pushed as over us splashed into the cold freezing water all I know then he got it too. Me and Josh push the kayaking over so we Climb back on top but Manasseh had a hard time getting back on. When Manasseh gets back on we lost him again SPLASH “don’t blame me that it cold”!





Friday, May 15, 2015