Friday, November 06, 2015

News Article

I'm blogging this because it was fun and challenging
I was learning about literacy and how to make a news article 

Catchy headline
Past tense
No personal pronouns
Intro, body and conclusion (paragraphs) 
Direct speech
Different sentence starters/lengths
Good word choice
Personal goal : Write simple, compound and complex sentences correctly.

The Golden Gate Diamond Thief

On the 2th of March Australia. The London Bank got robbed by a thief. He stole The Golden Gate Diamond the police don't know who or why.

The police told the banker that the diamond was on water so banker took the police to a computer that had a tracked the diamond. The detectives looked around and then one of the detective saw how he did it. First he got a laser cutter to cut a hole in the glass roof. Next he dropped a rope that was tied onto an air vent and knocked out two janitors and put into a janitor closet went past everyone and stole the diamond.

The London police chief told the police to check the camera in the bank. But it looked like the thief had some help. The police had a hard time seeing who it was.

Police had found a fingerprint on a piece of glass. The man was Robben Bank. The police made a stake out at Robben’s home. It was 4am.  "It looks like Robben did not stay at home" the police said.

The police saw that his car was gone but as they were looking, one of their phones went off "Hey, I think I know where Robben’s car is.” His car was at the Pacific docks but the car had a trailer - no boat. Police went to the bank and told the banker that they were in the Pacific Ocean. The banker went to a computer that tracked the diamond. However, it could only track within the Pacific Ocean. All of the police went to the middle of the Pacific Ocean. "

As the police were coming they had a clear look at who was helping Robben. It was his brother Brooke Banks. Brooke and Robben were captured by the police. 

The diamond is now safe in the bank.

By Dylan

Tuesday, November 03, 2015

Math Task

Weight and Capacity

Four  problems to solve.

Think what balance scales look like (image a see-saw)
Draw five diagrams of different looking balance scales and put on each side what might be being weighed

A school bus has a 2600 kg carrying capacity,  How many people would it be permitted to carry?   (think about the difference of child and adult)

 72 child and 1 adult   1 child = 36kg    1 adult = l90 kg

50 child and 9 adult

10 child and 25 adult

I can see a selection of containers with a capacity bigger than 1 L but smaller than 2 L.  What might the containers be?

L 1.01 - L 1.99

Make three different packages that have a mass of 1 kg.  Compare the size of your packages and discuss why they can be so different but have the same mass.

The three things I chose was water, two cans of sweet corn and three baking powder.

The mass is different but the Weight is the same because the water that is in it might be heavier than the baking powder so it needs more than the water

Monday, November 02, 2015

Art Task

I'm blogging this because I like art and it was very fun.
I was learning about art like drawing a bird, find the middle and more.

This is my bird art.
The most challenging thing was the colouring
My favourite thing was the the tree
My achievements was the colouring

Friday, October 16, 2015

Description Sense

I'm blogging this because I liked doing this and it was challenging.
We were learning to write a description from a sense.

Success Criteria
Has strong adjectives
Different sentence beginnings
Different sentence lengths
A simile and/or alliteration
Has an intro body and conclusion
Thoughtful word choices
Your own goal Write simple, compound and complex sentences correctly

When I turn around I see the most majestic scene. The clouds are as fluffy as sheep and there is green growing grass everywhere. Crystal flowing water at the bottom of the hill is going behind the tall trees. The sea blue sky is as blue as the ocean. The trees are scattered everywhere like soldiers at an army. The hills are going as far as I can see and begin to blend in with the crystal clear sky. It is an amazing and delicate scene.

Friday, September 11, 2015

Stan Walker song

I'm blogger this because challenging and fun

I was learning about Syllables.

There’s a little black box, yeah, 7
somewhere in the ocean,6
holding all the truth about us.8
It’s a little black box,
a record of emotion,7
everything's that ever was.7

Syllables: 41

This is my version of black box by Stan Walker.

There's a little black fox yeah(7)
Somewhere in the bushes (6)
That's holding all the food for us(8)
It's a little black fox (6)
A record of our foot steps (7)
Everything was falling down(7)

You may deny it, deny it,8
but when I find it, find it,7
I’m gonna play it aloud to the world.10
A little black box, yeah.6
A little black box, yeah.6

Syllable: 37

 But now you started it, started it
But when I find you, find you
I'm gonna say aloud to the world
A little black fox, yeah
A little black fox, yeah

Monday, September 07, 2015

Art Blog Post


I'm blogging this because it was very fun and challenging.
I was learning about 3D and how to draw some together.
This relates to me because I love playing and I've got a lot of Lego.

This is how I made is?

1. First I drew the outlines.
2. Next I put in colour ( I did it in coloured pencils but you can do it how you like)
3. Then I when over the pencil with sharpie.
4. After that done I got blue pencil sharpens and smudge it on the background
5. Lastly put it all on a yellow background

Friday, September 04, 2015

Stan Walker

I'm blogging this because it was very challenging.
I was learning to write a report of Stan Walker

Success criteria

Structured well ( paragraph and subheadings )
Vocabulary ( beat words and a topic words )
Sentence ( variety of different sentence starter )
No personal pronouns
Details (added in lots of true information )
Punctuation ( helps the reader)

Stan Walker

Who he is
Stan Walker is a New Zealand artist that has a passion for his work. He was born on October 23rd 1990 in Melbourne Australia . His parents are Ross and April Walker.Walker is of Maori descent and is from the Tahoe and Ngati Tuwharetoa tribes in NZ. He grew up on a marae n Mount Maunganui.

Up bringing
Walker had a rough upbringing because his parents spent a lot of time in jail ( not at the same time). At the age of 15 he started to go to church. Church helped him and his passion for music. Church made him a 'good boy'. He went to Fairfield intermediate then went to  Hamilton boys high and boarded at New Plymouth Boys High School.

Australian Idol
Stan Walker went on the Australian Idol Show at the age of 19 in 2009, on the 22nd of November at the Sydney Opera House. Before he went on he was nervous one After all the votes had been tallied up the winner was Stan Walker and he got an artist development fund worth $200,000.

Award and Achievements
Stan Walker started his own company (Stan Walker Music Pty Ltd) that is run by his mother April. Walker's debut single Black Box, was released following his win of the Australian idol. The song was 2nd on the ARIA Singles chart and 1st on the NZ singles chart

Now he is 24 and his company is making more and more songs and maybe it will make some people do it to. He sings from the heart His passion for music makes a bright future for him.